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Eliot is a marketing guy at Fuji Xerox. Prior to his current day job, he worked in the US for Adobe. Eliot holds a couple of degrees in printing and enjoys spending far too much time exploring the world of variable-data printing. In his copious free time Eliot enjoys kayaking, writing, blogging, eating and sleeping.

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I love to collect direct mail, like a bizarre obsession. Over the years I've built up a personal collection of the good, bad and very ugly DM pieces worthy of a home in my office drawer. One of my prize pieces is exactly that; a prize letter.

It wasn't sent to me but addressed to the previous occupant of our unit, so naturally I opened it. It was one of those catalogue mail DM pieces with the all too familar "unclaimed sweepstake" call to action. I remember first seeing these offers 20 years ago and they're still flooding letterboxes today.

20 years on and I really can't believe that there's an audience out there stupid enough to fall for this offer. While I'm guessing the target audience is probably little 80 year old ladies figuring out how to best spend their kids' inheritance, surely they're tuned in to what can only be a misleading scam.

The piece arrived in my mailbox in an envelope marked "PRIORITY DEADLINE". I guessed it must be important. But wait, there was also a tracking number printed on the envelope. Now, any untrained eye can spot that this tracking number was anything but unique - it had been printed using the same process as the rest of the envelope. Also, if it really was a priority tracked letter, then why did it land in my mailbox? Shouldn't I have signed for it? As a finishing touch, the envelope included a 'sender details' label, printed in a handwriting font, stating that my prize notification letter is waiting for me inside. If there really was a prize notification inisde, wouldn't this be the last thing to appear on the envelope? Do banks regularly send out PIN numbers and credit cards in envelopes which state their sensitive content?

But if this really is a compelling enough reason for the recipient to open the envelope, then inside they'll discover a two-page letter, which includes an official looking $100K voucher for an "unclaimed sweepstake prize" The prize amount on the voucher is printed using a cheque-style MICR font and even features a printed red seal just for added authenticity.

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4 Comments

k1bo
  • Wrote on 13 Jun, at 03:37PM
Spot on Eliot!!! Love the burn on the US Postal Service....are they trapped in the dark ages!!!! Typewriters...GOLD!
There really is some rubbish DM out there, which is hurting the industry as a whole. This kind of crap needs to be flushed out and brought down by authorities such as the ALRC.
Gibbo
  • Wrote on 13 Jun, at 05:03PM
Nice article, Eliot.

I agree with your article but not the heading ;)
Dingo
  • Wrote on 16 Jun, at 01:12PM
Whilst they may be unappealing to some, these types of mailings will continue to exist for as long as they keep working for the organisations that send them. They usually undergo rigorous testing, so what they’re doing must work, no matter how unappealing it might be to others. Obviously it appeals to the target audience, which is not you by the way but the person who previously lived in your unit. I don’t want to sound like I’m defending this type of DM as it’s really not my cup of tea either and whenever I’ve seen something like this, I too wonder about the types who respond – but they’re out there and it works for them! Yes, it’s not amongst the best DM you see but there are also some pretty bad TV/radio/web/etc ads too. Fortunately the bulk of DM produced in Australia is of a very high standard - just look at the number of shortlisted DM entries at Cannes where Australia is second only to Germany. Long live DM I say!
Eliot
  • Wrote on 16 Jun, at 01:27PM
I agree Dingo. I'm sure this DM works to some level, which is why it keeps on coming. I remember the first time I received one of these sweepstake letters -- I was so excited. I fell for the convincing typewritten letter, voucher and all. I couldn't wait to mail-in my claim coupon and was naturally surprised and disappointed when I didn't receive my winnings... But that was 22 years ago and I was 11 years old. Back then, computers were scarce and electronic typewriters were commonplace in the workplace, so maybe I can be forgiven, given my age and era. I assumed it's a different story today and I'm surpised to learn that this call-to-action and deceiving creative actually still cuts through.

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